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Post by Zekas on Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:30 pm

Hi guys,

Not sure if you read my introduction post, but have a look at it here, I guess it explains everything Smile

So, there you have it, my application for a proofer job. Anxiously waiting for the test Wink
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Post by VegaObscura on Mon Apr 04, 2011 8:24 pm

well i'm glad to meet you and quite certain i ned to get back into knowing what the heck is going on in the group seeing as i was a quite unaware our reader was actually finished. While I'm pretty sure you count as our main code proofer I see no problem with you aiming at manga proofer as well.

Code:
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[1]
-Public announcement.The schedule of the duel between the current

student committee and the new student committee will be decided by

the election administration as below.
-July 25th:general affair battle
 August 1st:secretary battle
 August 8th:treasurer battle
 August 15th:vice-president battle
 August 22th:president battle
(All start from 1:00 pm)

(white text:Finally the "election" 's starting day~!!)

-Normal students are forbidden from watching the battles in order to

protect the security.
[2]
-Sheesh,announcement- Although it is about whether the school be

destroyed or not
-Such thick heads those council members have
[3]
-So what now,Kurokami? It's time
-How are your reliable partners?
[4]
-Secretary Akune and Treasurer Kikaijima are attending former

president Hinokage and Aniki's training course
-That devilize training

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
02~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Don't ask me what you already knew
-Haha! My bad.But is it okay for you to ditch?
-Aren't you in the middle of the training for the president battle?
[2]
-...They asked me to cheer for their shares as well
-Well,I can't let Zekichi fight alone,too.
[3]
-I see I see.So
-Where is that Zenkichi-kun now?
[4]
-He decided to take another training because the devilize training

won't give any effect after a week
-But doesn't his absent now mean he is scared?He said he was scared

at the underground,didn't he?
[5]
-...If so then just let him be.Maguro-kun said that,too
-I still think that losing the general affair battle by default is the best

idea after all
[6]
-Well
-May be that's right,Mom.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
03~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-But too bad
(shirt:Unite as one! Victory for sure!! The student committee)
(white text:Arrived at the front line!! Those eyes hold no fear!!)
(small sfx:pant pant pant)
-I don't feel anything this time!!
(chapter 67's title:We are the student committee)
[2]
-Waahh!I told you not to use the student committee's room for

changing!!
-Nah
-First you should do something about that shirt
[3]
-Oh,I made that T-shirt for him the day before yesterday
-So that's your sense!!
[4]
-Oh that's right.Thanks Mom! This is really great.It makes my spirit

up to max!
-His mother's sense
-He likes it---!?
[5]
[6]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
04~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Hmph.Just barely for both T-shirt and time
-Zenkichi
[2]
-So how's it? You didn't take Aniki's training,let alone the devilize

training,but your secret training or something
-You won't say its result is also barely,do you?
[3]
-Whoa!
-I didn't expect such stupid question from you
[4]
-This one week I have taken a training from someone even greater

than Maguro-san
-What you should do now is not worrying but preparing for my

victory's celebration!!
[5]
-A trainer that even greater than Aniki...? This school has a person

like that?
-It doesn't look like a joke if you have that much confidence but...
[6]
-I see.Then it's fine
-Let's go to the acceptance.Let's teach those Minus
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
05~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-We're the student committee

(white text:Student committee's battle suit)
(bigger white text:RED model)

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
06~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Student committee election hall
[2]
-Ah.You're late,Medaka-chan
-Shame on you.The rule said you must be in time,didn't it?
[3]
-...Kumagawa
-You.You're alone?
[4]
-Yeah right.I'm so unpopular,right?
-The other Minus-es are all doing sea bathing or something to enjoy

the holiday
(sfx:turning page)
[5]
-By the way,yay!
-Hitoyoshi-sensei.Found ya!!
[6]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
07~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-I was shocked that you ran away from me the other time.Aha
-The truth is I was so excited from being able to meet you that I

came here 5 hours ago
[2]
-By the way,I went to buy porns with Emukae-chan in the end.But I

found a book with a girl looks just like you.Next time I'll bring it here

so that you can see it for yourself!
[3]
-...Okay
-Well,next time.
[4]
-Wait a sec,Kumagawa.Turn your face this way.
-Does being alone here mean you will participate in the general affair

battle by any chance?
[5]
-It's not "by any chance" because I planned to do it,Medaka-chan
-I dreamed of becoming a general affair a long time ago
[6]
-So today I'll be in your care,Zenkichi-chan
-Let's have a serious and fair battle!
[7]
-As expected,they don't have a proper formation...
-In the end,not giving away the first battle turned out to be the worst

choice.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
08~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
[2]
-Someone like you...How could you turn out to be like this?
-Kumagawa!!
[3]
-? Why are you angry,Medaka-chan?
-Because you can't fight me anymore? Or because Zenkichi-chan is on

a pinch right now?
[4]
-Those are included but...I'm asking you about everything!

Everything about you is irritating!!
-I can't understand even a single bit of what you're thinking!!
[5]
-Massacring class 13!? Killing all elites!? Why do you want to do those

things!?
-The world peace can't be archived by doing those things,right!?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
09~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Whether elite or abnormal,they're all humans,just like us!?
-They feel happy,they feel sad!You can't hurt them like that!
-Why can't you understand just that simple thing!?
[2]
-For that Kurokami to be upset like this...
-No,may be her calmness got exploded after knowing that he's

aiming for Hitoyoshi...?
[3]
-If you can't,then don't force yourself to understand
-Medaka-chan
[4]
-What...
[5]
-But why did I become like this,right? Hmph
-Now think about it,it's such strange that I haven't thought about it
[6]
[7]
-Yeah right.For example
-Someone said "One's life is plus-minus-zero"
[8]
-Saying even an elite feels sad and happy or saying an happy human

also passed that amount of hardship
-They are all that meaning.So I presume that he wants to say

everybody is equal.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
10~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-But the one who said "One's life is plus-minus-zero"
-must be a plus
[2]
-Because he was happy,he could say a phrase like a philosopher like

that
-At least we minus couldn't think that because there were good

things,all bad things can all become nothing

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
11~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-It's nothing.I just want all happy and plus people
-to have a taste of our feeling
[2]
-...That must also be a lie,right?
-You just want to cling to that lie
[3]
-...Right
-It must be so
[4]
-Anyway,I won't fight you,Medaka-chan.Because I hate you
-The other minus will take the president battle
[5]
-So Medaka-chan just have to stand there and watch me pinning

Zenkichi-chan to the floor
-Closely and carefully
[6]
-...Kumagawa!
-Because of that you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
12~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-It's time now so let me begin
-First,I'm deeply appreciate you for coming all the way here in spite

of your business
[2]
-Please allow me to introduce myself.I'll be in charge of the student

committee this time.I'm the Election management division's vice-

chairman,2nd year Class 13,Choujabaru Tokemichi
-I'm glad to work with both sides even for just this one summer
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
13~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-....It has been a long time,2nd year Choujabaru
-Since April's election,isn't it?
[2]
-My my,Kurokami-sama
-I'm terribly honored that you still remember someone like me
[3]
-As you see,the election management division,unlike the student

committee or the discipline committee,only works in shadow.So we

truly want you to forget about us once the election is over...
[4]
-Moreover,I didn't think that I can be in charge of your election for a

2nd time like this
-I swear upon the pride of a member of the election management

division that I'll give you fair judgements.But I'm afraid that because

of this tension,I may have some incompetences so please let me

know.
[5]
-Of course Kumagawa-sama,too.If you have any discontent
-I'll be glad if you let me hear about your thinking
[6]
-Hmph.You say discontent
-Being said so suddenly is just too..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
14~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
[2]
-What's the meaning of this idea,Kumagawa-sama?
[3]
-No I just want to test your qualification of being the one in

charge.And you passed it well
-Nice to work with you,Choujabaru-kun
[4]
-...Finally,you guys
-For nobody but Choujabaru-kun to be the referee
[5]
-The truth is I was worry about the chairman interfering with the

judge
-But if it's Choujabaru-kun,there's no need for that
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
15~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Just like his name,strict person like that is rare now
-No pressure can affect his judgement
-It'll be perfectly fair!Impossibly impartial!That's how he'll manage

this election for us.
[2]
-Now thinking about it,Choujabaru-kun is Unzen-kun's only male

friend,isn't he?
-Oh.May be they're getting along because they all prefer rules to

human
[3]
-But in other ways
-There'll be no recovery for us if we lose here
[4]
-No matter whether class 13 is massacred or the school is

destroyed.If class minus 13 wins
-2nd year Choujabaru will definitely choose them to be the student

committee without any hesitation...
[5]
[6]
-It's fine,Medaka-chan
-So we just have to win,right?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
16~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-It'll be easier for me if Kumagawa is my opponent.Much more easier

to deal with than Shiranui or Emukae
-So Medaka-chan,you can just be impossibly cocky and solidly calm

as usual
[2]
-Zenkichi...
[3]
-Hey,Kumagawa..I don't care about what you're spilling all over here
-I don't know and do not want to know why you're doing these or

why you became like this
[4]
-You,too.Don't think that people will understand you,cheeky
-You can just lose and being kicked out of this school without being

known as the way you are
[5]
-But because of that
-I want to say something to you
[6]
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17~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-One's life is plus
[2]
[3]
-Then let's start the first battle of the student committee election,the

general affair's battle
-By the way,please keep in mind that this election is based on

Kurobako cram school 's rules
[4]
-It's just using the Edo period's regulation as it was it's really

impossible.So I'll arrange the rules with my self-desicion
-Kurokami-sama,Kumagawa-sama,do you have any objection?
[5]
-No objection
[6]
-No objection
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18~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Excellent
-Further,in case there be injury or death,all will be deal as

accident.Do you have any objection?
[2]
-No objection
[3]
-No objection
[4]
-Excellent.Then first,Kumagawa-sama,who is the challenger,please

choose the form of the battle.
[5]
-The election management division has prepared 13 forms of battle

for the election this time.Of course those are all based on Kurobako's

rules.
-Kumagawa-sama,please choose one of these 13 cards as you like

(1st round:Human; 2nd round: Rat,Ox,Tiger ; 3rd round:

Rabbit,Dragon,Snake; 4th round:Horse,Sheep,Monkey; 5th

round:Cock,Dog,Boar)
[6]
-Deciding by lot...I understand that the challenger have the right to

choose
-But what'll come out by letting those Minus draw lots...?
[7]
[8]
-Then I choose "Mi" (the Snake)
-Let's go with the snake which deceived mankind
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19~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-You chose the card "Mi",right?I understood.As expected from

Kumagawa-sama
-Choosing this card from the very beginning is nobody but only you
[2]
(kanji:Snake)
[3]
(kanji:Snake's lair)
[4]
-The general affair's battle form will be "Viper's den"
(text:It won't end peacefully..this battle,venom!!
-This is the most cruel form of battle we have prepared this time.


Last edited by Mokuren on Tue Apr 05, 2011 5:16 am; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : fixed it from spoiler box to code box, it's somewhat easier to work with >_<)

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Post by Mokuren on Mon Apr 04, 2011 8:36 pm

Good luck on your test hun <3

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Post by VegaObscura on Mon Apr 04, 2011 9:20 pm

My beautiful colors and the pretty dissipating box have now gone to an early grave.................. now that my moment of silence was observed this seems to be a newly forming tradition where my posts keep getting edited (not in a bad way per se but still I am in mourning for the death of words)

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Post by Mokuren on Tue Apr 05, 2011 5:14 am

I am awfully sorry vega, but I know zekas will be proofing from his netbook, which has quite the small screen. Therefore putting it in a codebox is much more convienent for him.
However I did fix the colors now. I failed to notice you put em in, and it's a pity they don't work in codeboxes.

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Post by SuppaiNoRingo on Tue Apr 05, 2011 6:34 am

I, too, mourn for Vega's colorful box of love. I do welcome Mokuren's netbook friendly scrolling box though. And I wish Zekas good luck on his test.
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Post by kuja on Tue Apr 05, 2011 6:56 am

Good luck zekas~ Smile

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Post by Zekas on Tue Apr 05, 2011 7:25 pm

Here's my proofer test completed:

Code:
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[1]
-Public announcement. The schedule of the duel between the current
student committee and the new student committee will be decided by
the election administration as below.
-July 25th: general affair battle
August 1st: secretary battle
August 8th: treasurer battle
August 15th: vice-president battle
August 22th: president battle
(All start at 1:00 pm)
(white text: Finally, the "election"'s starting day!!)
-Normal students are forbidden from watching the battles in order to
maintain the security.

[2]
-Sheesh, announcement
-Although it is about whether the school will be destroyed or not
-Such thick heads those council members have

[3]
-So what now, Kurokami? It's time
-How are your reliable partners?

[4]
-Secretary Akune and Treasurer Kikaijima are attending former president Hinokage and Aniki's training course
-That Devilize training
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

02~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Don't ask me what you already know
-Haha! My bad. But is it okay for you to ditch training?
-Aren't you in the middle of the training for the president battle?

[2]
-...They asked me to cheer for their share as well
-Well, I can't let Zenkichi fight alone, too.

[3]
-I see, I see. So
-Where is that Zenkichi-kun now?

[4]
-He decided to take a different training because the Devilize training won't give any effect in a week
-But doesn't his absence now mean he is scared? He said he was scared when we were underground, didn't he?

[5]
-...If so then just let him be. Maguro-kun said that, too
-I still think that losing the general affair battle by default is the best
idea after all

[6]
-Well
-Maybe that's right, Mom.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

03~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-But too bad
(shirt: Unite as one! Victory is ensured!! The student committee)
(white text: Arrived at the front line!! Those eyes hold no fear!!)
(small sfx: pant pant pant)
-I don't feel anything this time!!
(chapter 67's title: We are the student committee)

[2]
-Waahh! I told you not to use the student committee's room for changing!!
-Nah
-First you should do something about that shirt

[3]
-Oh, I made that T-shirt for him the day before yesterday
-So that's your sense of fashion!!

[4]
-Oh that's right. Thanks Mom! This is really great. It takes my spirits to the max!
-His mother's fashion sense
-He likes it---!?
[5]

[6]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

04~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Hmph. Just barely for both T-shirt and time
-Zenkichi

[2]
-So how is it? You didn't take Aniki's training, let alone the Devilize  training, so you’ve been secretly training or something
-You won't say its result is also minimal, do you?

[3]
-Whoa!
-I didn't expect such a stupid question from you

[4]
-This week I took a training from someone even greater than Maguro-san
-What you should do now isn’t worrying but preparing for my victory  celebration!!

[5]
-A trainer that’s even greater than Aniki...? This school has a person like that?
-It doesn't look like a joke if you have that much confidence, but...

[6]
-I see. Then it's fine
-Let's go to the acceptance. Let's teach those Minuses
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

05~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-We're the student committee
(white text: Student committee's battle suit)
(bigger white text: RED model)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

06~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Student committee election hall

[2]
-Ah. You're late, Medaka-chan
-Shame on you. The rules said you must be on time, didn't they?

[3]
-...Kumagawa
-You. You're alone?

[4]
-Yeah right. I'm so unpopular, right?
-The other Minuses are all doing sea bathing or something to enjoy the holiday
(sfx: turning page)

[5]
-By the way, yay!
-Hitoyoshi-sensei. Found ya!!

[6]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

07~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-I was shocked that you ran away from me the other time. Aha
-The truth is I was so excited for being able to meet you that I came here 5 hours early
[2]

-By the way, I went to buy porn with Emukae-chan in the end. But I found a book with a girl that looks just like you. Next time I'll bring it here so that you can see for yourself!

[3]
-...Okay
-Well, next time.

[4]
-Wait a sec, Kumagawa. Turn your face this way.
-Does being alone here mean you will participate in the general affair  battle by any chance?

[5]
-It's not "by any chance" because I planned to do it, Medaka-chan
-I’ve dreamed of becoming a general affair for a long time

[6]
-So today I'll be in your care, Zenkichi-chan
-Let's have a serious and fair battle!

[7]
-As expected, they don't have a proper formation...
-In the end, not giving away the first battle turned out to be the worst  choice.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

08~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]

[2]
-Someone like you... How could you turn out to be like this?
-Kumagawa!!

[3]
-? Why are you angry, Medaka-chan?
-Because you can't fight me anymore? Or because Zenkichi-chan is in a pinch right now?

[4]
-Those are included but... I'm asking you about everything! Everything about you is irritating!!
-I can't understand even a single bit of what you're thinking!!

[5]
-Massacring class 13!? Killing all elites!? Why do you want to do those  things!?
-World peace can't be achieved by doing those things, right!?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

09~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Whether elite or abnormal, they're all humans, just like us!?
-They feel happiness, they feel sadness! You can't hurt them that way!
-Why can't you understand something so simple!?

[2]
-For that Kurokami to be upset like this...
-No, maybe her calmness exploded after knowing that he's aiming for  Hitoyoshi...?

[3]
-If you can't, then don't force yourself to understand
-Medaka-chan

[4]
-What...

[5]
-But why did I become like this, right? Hmph
-Now think about it, it's so strange that I haven't thought about it

[6]

[7]
-Yeah right. For example
-Someone said "One's life is plus-minus-zero"

[8]
-Saying even an elite feels sadness and happiness, or saying a happy human
also went through that amount of hardship
-It all means the same. So I presume that he wants to say
everybody is equal.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

10~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-But the one who said "One's life is plus-minus-zero"
-Must be a Plus

[2]
-Because he was happy, he could say such a philosophical phrase
-At least we Minuses couldn’t think like that, because if there were good things all bad things could become meaningless
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

11~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-It's nothing. I just want all happy and Plus people
-To have a taste of how we feel

[2]
-...That must also be a lie, right?
-You just want to cling to that lie

[3]
-...Right
-It must be so

[4]
-Anyway, I won't fight you, Medaka-chan. Because I hate you
-The other Minuses will take the president battle

[5]
-So Medaka-chan just has to stand there and watch me pin Zenkichi-chan to the floor
-Closely and carefully

[6]
-...Kumagawa!
-Because of that, you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

12~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-It's time now, so let me begin
-First, I deeply appreciate you coming all the way here despite of your business

[2]
-Please allow me to introduce myself. I'll be in charge of the student
committee this time. I'm the Election management division's vice-chairman, 2nd year Class 13, Choujabaru Tokemichi
-I'm glad to work with both sides even for just this one summer
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

13~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-....It has been a long time, 2nd year Choujabaru
-Since April's election, isn't it?

[2]
-My my, Kurokami-sama
-I'm terribly honored that you still remember someone like me

[3]
-As you see, the election management division, unlike the student committee or the discipline committee, only works in shadow. So we truly want you to forget about us once the election is over...

[4]
-Moreover, I didn't think that I could be in charge of your election for a
2nd time like this
-I swear upon my pride as a member of the election management division that I'll give you fair judgment. But I'm afraid that because of this tension, I may be a little incompetent so please let me know.

[5]
-Of course Kumagawa-sama, too. If you have any discontent
-I'd be glad if you let me hear what you think

[6]
-Hmph. You say discontent
-Being said so suddenly is just too..
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

14~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]

[2]
-What's the meaning of this idea, Kumagawa-sama?

[3]
-No, I just want to test your qualification of being the one in charge. And you passed it well
-Nice to work with you, Choujabaru-kun

[4]
-...Finally, you guys
-For Choujabaru-kun of all people to be the referee

[5]
-The truth is I was worried about the chairman interfering with the judge
-But if it's Choujabaru-kun, there's no need for that
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

15~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Just like his name, a strict person like that is rare now
-No pressure can affect his judgment
-It'll be perfectly fair! Impossibly impartial! That's how he'll manage
this election for us.

[2]
-Now, thinking about it, Choujabaru-kun is Unzen-kun's only male
friend, isn't he?
-Oh. Maybe they're getting along because they both prefer rules to
human emotions

[3]
-But in other ways
-There'll be no recovery for us if we lose here

[4]
-No matter whether Class 13 is massacred or the school is destroyed. If Class minus 13 wins
-2nd year Choujabaru will definitely choose them to be the student
committee without any hesitation...

[5]

[6]
-It's fine, Medaka-chan
-So we just have to win, right?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

16~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-It'll be easier for me if Kumagawa is my opponent. Much more easier to deal with than Shiranui or Emukae
-So Medaka-chan, you can just be impossibly cocky and solidly calm as usual

[2]
-Zenkichi...

[3]
-Hey, Kumagawa.. I don't care about what you're spilling all over here
-I don't know and do not want to know why you're doing this or why you became like this

[4]
-You, too. Don't think that people will understand you, cheeky
-You can just lose and be kicked out of this school without being known for who you are

[5]
-But because of that
-I want to say something to you

[6]
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[1]
-One's life is Plus

[2]

[3]
-Then let's start the first battle of the student committee election, the
general affair's battle
-By the way, please keep in mind that this election is based on Kurobako cram school's rules

[4]
-It's just using the Edo period's regulation as it was is really  impossible. So I'll arrange the rules myself
-Kurokami-sama, Kumagawa-sama, do you have any objection?

[5]
-No objection

[6]
-No objection
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[1]
-Excellent
-Furthermore, in case there be injury or death, all will be dealt with as if it were an accident. Do you have any objection?

[2]
-No objection

[3]
-No objection

[4]
-Excellent. Then, Kumagawa-sama, who is the challenger, first choose the form of the battle please.

[5]
-The election management division has prepared 13 forms of battle for the election this time. Of course those are all based on Kurobako's rules.
-Kumagawa-sama, please choose one of these 13 cards as you like
(1st round: Human; 2nd round: Rat, Ox, Tiger ; 3rd round: Rabbit, Dragon, Snake; 4th round: Horse, Sheep, Monkey; 5th round: Cock, Dog, Boar)

[6]
-Deciding by lot... I understand that the challenger has the right to  choose
-But what'll come out of letting those Minuses draw lots...?

[7]

[8]
-Then I choose "Mi" (the Snake)
-Let's go with the snake which deceived mankind
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[1]
-You chose the card "Mi", right? I understood. As to be expected from
Kumagawa-sama
-Choosing this card from the very beginning, only you would do that

[2]
(kanji: Snake)

[3]
(kanji: Snake's lair)

[4]
-The general affair's battle form will be "Viper's den"
(text: It won't end peacefully.. this battle, venom!!
-We’ve prepared the most cruel form of battle this time.

I guess I'll mark the lines I change somehow when I'm actually proofing for real Smile Might be easier to work with. I must say, some parts can be quite confusing, as some translated stuff that needs correcting can be interpreted to mean several completely different things Razz I hope I've done a good enough job. Any questions or comments as to why I did or didn't do certain things are welcome.
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Post by VegaObscura on Tue Apr 05, 2011 7:34 pm

congrats you passed with a few inconsequential typos like having a quotation mark and apostrophe next to each other and a few s's missing but far above cruddy making your work a 8-10 on actual implementation
a 9-10 on speed
and a 8 for calling me out on the multi choice lines and the fact that a few of them were altered to make them capable of several interpretations.

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Post by Zekas on Tue Apr 05, 2011 7:38 pm

Great, thank you!

That quotation mark thing was done by the translator, I figured there must have been a reason for having "election" in quotation marks, so I left them as they were Razz Guess I could have gone for the safe option and changed it to ... "election" is.... Why did I just think of that? Razz Oh well ^^
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Post by Mokuren on Tue Apr 05, 2011 8:00 pm

gratz hun <3

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Post by VegaObscura on Tue Apr 05, 2011 8:44 pm

congrats glad to see he gave you what you deserved

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