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Post by WhyTheHarsh on Sun Feb 20, 2011 3:04 am

Job Applying for: Proofreader
Name: WhyTheHarsh (chatango)

i was pointed towards this site when JackintheBox6 was visiting AnimeFushigi, and was recruiting. I'm very skilled at finding spelling errors, and i enjoy reading any bit i can get, other than Pulitzer Prize Winners Sleep Sleep
i have worked with a few people on projects, but they've all gone bust, and i read for friends before they post on MediaMiner (it's pretty much a place you can post any authorial *maybe a word???* projects you write)

I'm pretty much free after school any time other than Tuesdays and Thursdays, so 5 days out of a week i'm online
If you need to contact me personally, pm me on chatango
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Re: Job Application: Proof reader

Post by Xᴇʀø Rᴀiɴ ♥ on Sun Feb 20, 2011 4:14 am

I hope you get accepted Why! :3
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Re: Job Application: Proof reader

Post by SuppaiNoRingo on Sun Feb 20, 2011 5:41 am

Alright, Welcome to the forums;
You don't like Pulitzer Prize winners? Why not?
Our head proofreader will show up sometime and test you with a script.
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Re: Job Application: Proof reader

Post by VegaObscura on Sun Feb 20, 2011 12:43 pm

Hello there I'm the head proofreader VegaObscura I'm on every 5 hours these days and enjoy reading a book or 2 a day as well. Heres the first test its around 8 pages and isn't to hard. The next only comes depending on who well you do this one.
Code:
01~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Searching for "happiness" and "misfortune"...The two leaders who destined to be enemies!!
(title: "I wonder if we could understand each other")

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
02~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Onii-sama,finally, we entered the 2nd part of the committee election
-So let me sum up the progress until now.
(white text:The last two battles...!! Difficult for the student committee!?)
[2]
-Alot happened in the general affair's manager's battle
-But in short, it was Zenkichi's victory
[3]
-Though Kuji-nee was able to archive victory in the next secretary's battle as well
-In order to prevent Kumagawa's plan, she had to lose in the end.
[4]
-The treasurer's battle presented the tag team of the mother and son between Zenkichi and Hitoyoshi-sensei
-But at the very end, they ended up having a draw by Kumagawa's plan
[5]
-And so, our final result until now is 1 win, 1 lose, 1 draw. But the new committee will win if the election ends in a draw
-So the current committee isn't allowed to lose another battle.In short, we're being cornered
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
03~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-...Then Medaka-chan
-What's your feeling now?
[2]
-Yes.Indeed Kumagawa's "All-Fiction" is powerful as you see
-But it's not like there's no way to defeat it
[3]
-Somehow it's like something born from Kumagawa's troublesome personality
-Though it was said to be able to make everything become nothing,it still has its disadvantage as well as its advantage.For example,it couldn't erase other minus,which even Kumagawa didn't know about
[4]
-Kuji-nee said that it was called uncontrollable but I think the truth is,Kumagawa has no intention to use it seriously
[5]
-No,Medaka-chan.That's not what I want to hear
-What're your feeling now,after you faced them in reality now?
[6]
-...Yes.Somehow they're eccentric
-And after a series of difficult battles,I don't think this election is fun or something
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
04~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-But,after all the battles we 've overcome until now
-I came up with the conclusion that we and them can understand each others
[2]
-...Of course what they've done and what they're planning to do are unforgivable
[3]
-But bearing unbearable things, enduring unendurable things, forgiving unforgivable things is our way to do thing
-And is also duty of the student committee.Kurokami Medaka will treasure even her natural enemy as how she does with others!
[4]
-...By the way,my opinion is the same as Kurokami's
-Onii-chan
[5]
-I'm not a specialist in fighting after all.But even so, I have a thought that I can get along with Shibushi
-And,may be it's just my selfishness,but I think she is also thinking the same thing
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
05~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Their personalities are naturally hard to confront.But if we don't confront them,we can't understand anything
-I can even say that because nobody has ever tried to confront them,they became terrible like that.
[2]
-So let's face them and understand each others
-That's how we do a prank on them
[3]
-...Oh my.Medaka-chan.Kujira-chan
-When I was in the hospital,you both grew up well
[4]
-That was a splendid conclusion of you two
-You are really my cute little sisters
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
06~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Combination between Mars mode and "Ice-Fire"!?
-There's no way he's still alive,isn't it !?
[2]
-...Ahaha,it seems you had a good fight with class minus 13. Sorry that I couldn't be with you guys at important moment
[3]
-Don't worry about it.Maguro-san also had hard time,right?
-After all,even if Maguro-kun was there,it's not like the situation would turn out different
-Yeah.I can even say that thanks to Maguro-san being hospitalized,we could come this far.
-Yes yes,Aniki's absent helped us alot.
-I beg you.Would you please come back to the hospital?
-Hey hey!? Why the comment became harsher when our relationship is closer!?
[4]
-But...Letting jokes aside
-We aren't joking
-You guys chose this way,right?
[5]
-You said you will try to understand them
-Or even forgive them.But those won't be easy.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
07~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Because they've been living livelessly
-and lost what impossible to lose
[2]
-Okay,the preparation is completed
-Let's begin,Gagamaru-chan
[3]
-Oh,but Kumagawa-senpai
-I still don't get what we're going to do now...
[4]
-You see.I said I'm going to take back a minus in my dream,right? I want you to help me doing that
[5]
-Physically, I want you to
-kill me with your hand
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
08~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Kill you...I refuse.I hate being a murder! I'm fine with just breaking your arms or something but! Why must I lay my hand on you!
-If you need to die to go into a dream then just commit suicide by jumping down from the rooftop!!
[2]
-I don't want to
-It's scary
[3]
-Anyway,I refuse.God, I just wondered what you were going to tell me to do...You should have some limits for your jokes
-I'm under pressure being a temporary leader thanks to you now...
[4]
-...Sheesh.Gagamaru-chan is really rational.Normal minus will just kill me immediately
-That's your minus (good point) but also your minus (weak point) if you want to participate in the vice-president's battle,you know?
[5]
-Okay.Then I'll take a bad role for now
-Let's provoke Gagamaru-chan
[6]
-Provoke?
-That's useless! No matter what you say,I'll...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
09~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Hey,jerk
-You seems able to fight with cards (Very Happy)
[2]
[3]
[4]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
10~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Why...That much!
-How can you say terrible things to hurt other like that!!
-Why it must be cards!?
[2]
-Nobody could use cards as weapon!
-In other words,you wanted to say that I'm a fool who can't tell 2D from 3D,right!?
[3]
-This kind of insult is my first time! I won't forgive you!
-I! will! kill you!!
[4]
-What a good minus
-As expected from a minus
[5]
-Anyway,killing an stand-still student is regretful
-So I'll charge in,Gagamaru-chan
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
11~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
[2]
-Wow...err
-What's this called...
[3]
-"Encounter"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
12~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-I'm moved
-This is what you call an irrational world
[2]
-Yeah,Gagamaru-chan.Now, your victory in the vice-president's battle is for sure
-Kukukuku! I must say thank you,Kumagawa-senpai
-You did this much to me
[3]
-What ya saying,it's also for me as well.This time I'll come back after a week.So please hide my corpse along with cleaning equipments in the locker.
[4]
-See ya
-Do your best
[5]
-I will
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
13~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
[2]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
14~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Our problem now is who will enter the vice-president's battle?
-Maguro-san ditched out from the hospital.But what about Akune-senpai and Kikaijima?
[2]
-They all regained conciousness
-As expected from athletes.That should have been nice for us
[3]
-But now that the devilize training isn't completed,vice-president's battle is impossible for them.
-That's why I have them take out my other duty
[4]
-Other duty...
-you said?
[5]
-A secret duty which can only be completed by them
-If we could make it to the president's battle,that's thanks to their effort
[6]
-...Onii-sama,I understood about secretary Akune and treasurer Kikaijima
-But what about former president Hinokage? Did he also take a secret duty?
[7]
-Well,I forgot about it
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
15~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-He retired
-Hinokage Kuudou can't fight anymore
[2]
-Ahyahya
-Sunbathing? Hinokage-senpai!
[3]
-What's that mustache? Working hard?
-Though it's "Shadow of the Sun" (Hinokage), I didn't see your shadow.Ahyahya!
[4]
-Oh,Shiranui
-You're as usual
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
16~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Sneaking around all the time
-You did that at the April's election,too, didn't ya?
[2]
-As that time,I still didn't get
-who you're helping now
[3]
-That's really not like you,Hinokage-senpai
-If you're fine now then you should've sneaked into class minus 13 or something
-...I don't need you to tell me that.It's just...
-Shiranui.I saw the treasurer's battle
[4]
-She took a minus 's hand.
-She and the minus understood each others.I saw all of those.
[5]
[6]
-When I was a president,I fought all the time, beated a lot of enemies,drove a lot of enemies away
-For me,they were just enemies who I didn't know what they were thinking. And for them,I was the same.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
17~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-...But,what if they and me
-could have understand each others like that....
[2]
-They must have forgotten about me already though...
[3]
-Shiranui.I'm embarassed
-I'm so embarassed that I even told Medaka and others whether they were qualified or disqualified.I want to die now.
[4]
-I tried to be an upperclassman
-But in the end,they could overcome everything without me.
[5]
-I couldn't do anything
-Though I told them to face with minus....
[6]
[7]
-...It's okay
-Still not too late now,right?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
18~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-There's nobody in the student committee who can enter the vice-president's battle.If this goes on,they'll lose by default
-Please come and help them
[2]
-You're telling me to enter the vice-president's battle?
[3]
-Yes
-It's your chance to become hero just like your name,Hinokage-senpai
[4]
-...That's impossible,Shiranui.I don't know what you're planning
-But I can't fight anymore
[5]
-I already lost
-My abnormal can't win against a minus.I'll just interfere with Medaka's will now...
[6]
-I want to become her strength.But I'm useless now...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
19~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
[2]
-It'll be a trouble if you keep depressing like that,Hinokage-senpai.Stop mumbling like that and fight already
-If your skill doesn't work then I'll lend you mine
[3]
-But just don't forget
-That my "Real-Eater" is not very convenient to use
[4]
-August 8th.Vice-president's battle
-Everybody.Thank you for coming here although it's in the middle of the Bon Festival
-It's time now so let's begin the vice-president's battle
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
20~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Participant from the new committee is Gagamaru-sama
-And
-From the current committee is Kurokami-sama.Am I wrong?
[2]
-...That's right.
-Let me fight today
[3]
-Is it really okay?
-If you fight now then the president's battle...
[4]
-Okay or not, I couldn't find someone to replace
-And we can't give away the vice-president's battle either
[5]
-For now
-Let's just focus on this battle
[6]
-Hey hey,aren't you being too rash? Kurokami
[7]
-And aren't you the president?
-Then you mustn't participate in anything other than the president's battle
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
21~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Just leave everything here to this retired old man
-I'll fight for ya
[2]
-Yo,long time no see,Gagamaru-kun
-I came to understand you
[3]
-Who?
(text on the left:The hero returned to the battlefield...!!)
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Re: Job Application: Proof reader

Post by VegaObscura on Mon Feb 21, 2011 2:31 am

Besides bumping this ansd makiing sure the newest apprentice applicant realizes their test is up this will also be where i post the review. I'' even remember to say if they pass or not besides the grades.

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hmm

Post by WhyTheHarsh on Mon Feb 21, 2011 2:33 am

i know, i'm rechecking my work because i didn't understand some bits of it

edit: Here's my test, i didn't get the story a bit, but i tried my best with what i could make of it.
(AND I DON'T KNOW HOW TO GET IT IN THE SCROLL BOX) 14 tries for the got-durn box

Code:
01~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Searching for "happiness" and "misfortune"...The two leaders who are destined to be enemies!!
(title: "I wonder if we could understand each other")

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
02~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Onii-sama, finally, we entered the 2nd part of the committee election,
-So let me sum up the progress until now.
(white text: The last two battles...!! Difficult for the student committee!?)
[2]
-Alot happened in the general affair's manager's battle,
-But in short, it was Zenkichi's victory.
[3]
-Though Kuji-nee was able to achieve victory in the next secretary's battle as well,
-In order to prevent Kumagawa's plan, she had to lose in the end.
[4]
-The treasurer's battle presented the tag team of the mother and son between Zenkichi and Hitoyoshi-sensei,
-But at the very end, they ended up having a draw by Kumagawa's plan.
[5]
-And so, our final result until now is 1 win, 1 lose, 1 draw. But the new committee will win if the election ends in a draw,
-So the current committee isn't allowed to lose another battle. In short, we're being cornered.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
03~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-...Then Medaka-chan,
-What's your feeling now?
[2]
-Yes. Indeed Kumagawa's "All-Fiction" is powerful as you see,
-But it's not like there's no way to defeat it.
[3]
-Somehow it's like something born from Kumagawa's troublesome personality.
-Though it was said to be able to make everything become nothing, it still has its disadvantage as well as its advantage. For example, it couldn't erase the other minus, which even Kumagawa didn't know about.
[4]
-Kuji-nee said that it was called uncontrollable but I think the truth is, Kumagawa has no intention to use it seriously.
[5]
-No, Medaka-chan. That's not what I want to hear.
-What're your feelings now, after you faced them in reality?
[6]
-...Yes. Somehow they're eccentric,
-And after a series of difficult battles, I don't think this election is fun or something.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
04~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-But, after all the battles we've overcome until now,
-I came up with the conclusion that we can understand each other.
[2]
-...Of course what they've done and what they're planning to do are unforgivable.
[3]
-But bearing unbearable things, enduring unendurable things, forgiving unforgivable things is our way to do thing,
-And is also a duty of the student committee. Kurokami Medaka will treasure even her natural enemy as how she does with others!
[4]
-...By the way, my opinion is the same as Kurokami's.
-Onii-chan.
[5]
-I'm not a specialist in fighting after all. But even so, I think that I can get along with Shibushi
-And, maybe it's just my selfishness, but I think she is also thinking the same thing
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
05~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Their personalities are naturally hard to confront. But if we don't confront them, we can't understand anything.
-I can even say that because nobody has ever tried to confront them, they became terrible like that.
[2]
-So let's face them and understand each other.
-That's how we do a prank on them.
[3]
-...Oh my. Medaka-chan. Kujira-chan,
-When I was in the hospital, you both grew up well.
[4]
-That was a splendid conclusion you two,
-You are really my cute little sisters.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
06~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Combination between Mars mode and "Ice-Fire"!?
-There's no way he's still alive, isn't it !?
[2]
-...Ahaha, it seems you had a good fight with class minus 13. Sorry that I couldn't be with you guys at important moment.
[3]
-Don't worry about it. Maguro-san also had a hard time, right?
-After all, even if Maguro-kun was there, it's not like the situation would turn out different
-Yeah. I can even say that thanks to Maguro-san being hospitalized, we could come this far.
-Yes yes, Aniki's absence helped us a lot.
-I beg you, would you please come back to the hospital?
-Hey hey!? Why did the comment became harsher when our relationship is closer!?
[4]
-But...Letting jokes aside,
-We aren't joking.
-You guys chose this way, right?
[5]
-You said you will try to understand them,
-Or even forgive them. But those won't be easy.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
07~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Because they've been living lifelessly,
-and lost what is impossible to lose
[2]
-Okay, the preparation is completed
-Let's begin, Gagamaru-chan
[3]
-Oh, but Kumagawa-senpai
-I still don't get what we're going to do now...
[4]
-You see. I said I'm going to take back a minus in my dream, right? I want you to help me in doing that.
[5]
-Physically, I want you to kill me with your hand.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
08~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Kill you?...I refuse. I hate being a murder! I'm fine with just breaking your arms or something but! Why must I lay my hand on you!
-If you need to die to go into a dream then just commit suicide by jumping down from the rooftop!!
[2]
-I don't want to,
-It's scary.
[3]
-Anyway, I refuse. God, I just wondered what you were going to tell me to do...You should have some limits to your jokes.
-I'm under pressure being a temporary leader thanks to you now...
[4]
-...Sheesh. Gagamaru-chan is really rational. A normal minus would just kill me immediately.
-That's your minus (good point) but also your minus (weak point) if you want to participate in the vice-president's battle, you know?
[5]
-Okay. Then I'll take a bad role for now.
-Let's provoke Gagamaru-chan.
[6]
-Provoke?
-That's useless! No matter what you say, I'll...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
09~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Hey, jerk,
-You seem able to fight with cards. (Very Happy)
[2]
[3]
[4]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
10~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Why...That much!
-How can you say terrible things to hurt others like that!!
-Why must it be cards!?
[2]
-Nobody could use cards as weapon!
-In other words, you wanted to say that I'm a fool who can't tell 2D from 3D, right!?
[3]
-This kind of insult is a first! I won't forgive you!
-I! Will! Kill you!!
[4]
-What a good minus.
-As expected from a minus.
[5]
-Anyway, killing a stand-still student is regretful,
-So I'll charge in, Gagamaru-chan.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
11~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
[2]
-Wow...err
-What's this called?...
[3]
-"Encounter"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
12~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-I'm moved
-This is what you call an irrational world
[2]
-Yeah, Gagamaru-chan. Now, your victory in the vice-president's battle is for sure
-Kukukuku! I must thank you, Kumagawa-senpai,
-You did this much to me.
[3]
-What are you saying, it's also for me as well. This time I'll come back after a week. So please hide my corpse along with cleaning equipment in the locker.
[4]
-See ya.
-Do your best.
[5]
-I will.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
13~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
[2]
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
14~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Our problem now is who will enter the vice-president's battle?
-Maguro-san ditched out from the hospital, but what about Akune-senpai and Kikaijima?
[2]
-They all regained consciousness.
-As expected from athletes. That should have been nice for us.
[3]
-But now that the devilizing training isn't completed, the vice-president's battle is impossible for them.
-That's why I’ll have them take out my other duty.
[4]
-Other duty...
-you said?
[5]
-A secret duty which can only be completed by them
-If we could make it to the president's battle, it’ll be thanks to their effort.
[6]
-...Onii-sama, I understood about secretary Akune and treasurer Kikaijima
-But what about former president Hinokage? Did he also take a secret duty?
[7]
-Well, I forgot about it.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
15~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-He retired.
-Hinokage Kuudou can't fight anymore.
[2]
-Ahyahya!
-Sunbathing? Hinokage-senpai!
[3]
-What's that moustache? Working hard?
-Though it's "Shadow of the Sun" (Hinokage), I didn't see your shadow. Ahyahya!
[4]
-Oh, Shiranui,
-You're the same as usual.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
16~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Sneaking around all the time,
-You did that at the April's election, too, didn't ya?
[2]
-Same as that time, I still don't get who you're helping now
[3]
-That's really not like you, Hinokage-senpai.
-If you're fine now then you should've snuck into class minus 13 or something
-...I don't need you to tell me that. It's just...
-Shiranui, I saw the treasurer's battle.
[4]
-She took a minus' hand.
-She and the minus understood each other. I saw all of them.
[5]
[6]
-When I was a president, I fought all the time, beat a lot of enemies, and drove a lot of enemies away.
-For me, they were just enemies who I didn't know what they were thinking. And for them, I was the same.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
17~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-...But, what if we could have understood each other like that....
[2]
-They must have forgotten about me already though...
[3]
-Shiranui. I'm embarrassed.
-I'm so embarrassed that I even told Medaka and the others whether they were qualified or disqualified. I want to die now.
[4]
-I tried to be an upperclassman,
-But in the end, they could overcome everything without me.
[5]
-I couldn't do anything,
-Though I told them to face with minus....
[6]
[7]
-...It's okay.
-It’s still not too late now, right?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
18~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-There's nobody in the student committee who can enter the vice-president's battle. If this goes on, they'll lose by default.
-Please come and help them.
[2]
-You're telling me to enter the vice-president's battle?
[3]
-Yes
-It's your chance to become a hero just like your name, Hinokage-senpai
[4]
-...That's impossible, Shiranui. I don't know what you're planning, but I can't fight anymore
[5]
-I already lost.
-My abnormal can't win against a minus. I'll just interfere with Medaka's will now...
[6]
-I want to become her strength. But I'm useless now...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
19~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
[2]
-It'll be a trouble if you keep being depressed like that, Hinokage-senpai. Stop mumbling and fight already
-If your skill doesn't work then I'll lend you mine.
[3]
-But just don't forget,
-That my "Real-Eater" is not very convenient to use.
[4]
-August 8th.Vice-president's battle
-Everybody. Thank you for coming here even though it's in the middle of the Bon Festival
-It's time now so let's begin the vice-president's battle!!!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
20~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[1]
-Participant from the new committee is Gagamaru-sama.
-And,
-From the current committee is Kurokami-sama. Am I wrong?
[2]
-...That's right.
-Let me fight today.
[3]
-Is it really okay?
-If you fight now then the president's battle...
[4]
-Okay or not, I couldn't find someone to replace (missing name?).
-And we can't give away the vice-president's battle either.
[5]
-For now, let's just focus on this battle.
[6]
-Hey hey, aren't you being too rash? Kurokami?!
[7]
-And aren't you the president?
-Then you mustn't participate in anything other than the president's battle
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[1]
-Just leave everything here to this retired old man,
-I'll fight for ya.
[2]
-Yo, long time no see, Gagamaru-kun.
-I came to understand you.
[3]
-Who?
(text on the left: The hero returned to the battlefield...!!)
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Post by VegaObscura on Mon Feb 21, 2011 11:45 am

You caught the typos and obvious flaws but missed over half of the sentences needing to be rearranged for better flow. I purposely gave you a random chapter from a manga not even done on our site to make sure you couldn't just go read the manga somewhere else and get extra assistance so your trouble with realizing how it was supposed to go was understandable and expected. I recommend that whatever manga you end up assigned to is read a few times to get you accustomed to how your characters are supposed to act and how the action flows. Some manga have slow stately paces and rarely work with short to the point sentences others wouldn't work without them. I give you a 3 out of 5 on handling unexpected and new manga, a 5 out of 5 on actual proofreading, and a passing grade of 85 overall.

Congrats you get to be our newest proofer. Joining the ranks of our awesome, fantastic, totally rad and above all humble group is a great honor and we hope to see much of you in the future.

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YAY!!

Post by WhyTheHarsh on Mon Feb 21, 2011 3:16 pm

Yeah, I realize now what sentences I screwed up, but with some of the manga i've read they cut it off midsentence, so I was getting really confused with that part.
I'm really happy that I got the job, and i'll try my best with proofreading that I work on
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