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Post by Jackinthebox6 on Fri Dec 24, 2010 5:01 am

Hopefully I have done a decent job....
This was done without the raw so I wasn't too worried about whether or not it flowed with the story. Mainly focused on my understanding of the English language. =/

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after some consideration I realized i shoulda used the raw, so yeah, I guess I will next time...
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Re: Proof Reading and Such

Post by The Admin With a Big Name on Fri Dec 24, 2010 5:22 am

lol well welcome and I will let either Ringo or Hazama which ever one drifts over this way to talk to you more about the awesomeness which is working under us as a slave. as a proofreader. They along with the translator will be checking your work to see if it looks right and then tada you will become a official Overload Scans Proofreader.
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Re: Proof Reading and Such

Post by Hazama on Fri Dec 24, 2010 7:41 am

Welcome~~
You are just in time Very Happy what are we waiting for!? XD
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so yeah XD I hope people dont leave without a notice X(

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Re: Proof Reading and Such

Post by The Admin With a Big Name on Fri Dec 24, 2010 3:10 pm

if you dont have the raw im sure hazama would link you
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LOL

Post by Jackinthebox6 on Fri Dec 24, 2010 8:13 pm

Well I failed to realize that this was the actual recruiting section. Must be weird that I just showed up one day and posted a proof read of god seeker, which was done without the raw (cannot stress enough how bothered I am by my lack of raw). Embarassed
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Re: Proof Reading and Such

Post by Hazama on Fri Dec 24, 2010 9:37 pm

^ I was actually surprised on how you got your hands on the godseeker translation Shocked
we really dont expect you to proof with a raw but if its for context purposes, then it would be more effective X)
If you really want to proof with the raw, here: mediafire.com ?9b06o9j29d0dxyn

Hiyuki (translator of godseeker), will most probably pop here to check on you Smile

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Re: Proof Reading and Such

Post by Hiyuki on Sat Dec 25, 2010 12:58 am

(´_ゝ`) I don't really see things changed lol So, either he's not up for the job, or my english isn't bad.

/11 ; -5- ; L: 「気合を入れて」 means put some spirit in , pump up, =| I dunno how to put it words oh my. But "liven up" doesn't cut it here. Please look for another word. Thank you.

/15 ; -7- ; L< It's fun to tease you pure-minded. The feudal lord's only fun. <-You missed this

From what I saw, there where only 2 things other than punctuation changed. I found the first punctuation change, couldn't be bothered with the rest. ┐( ̄ー ̄)┌

@Hazama, Kati: ┐( ̄ー ̄)┌

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Post by The Admin With a Big Name on Sat Dec 25, 2010 1:07 am

oh yeah I did message vega and he said he doesnt mind doing a little proofreading since cxc already finished their end the year batch
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Re-proof

Post by Jackinthebox6 on Sat Dec 25, 2010 3:09 am

if anyone didn't notice the change of files in the original post...
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Re: Proof Reading and Such

Post by Hazama on Sat Dec 25, 2010 5:55 am

@Hiyuki: I tooold you your engurish isnt bad /(>3>)/ some punctuation tweaks here and there (maybe typos too) is enough :3

@Kati: wait, vega is with cxc now so he doesnt bother visiting here? That makes sense bounce ......wait.. Im not qualified to say that XP

@Jack: lol I just noticed your PMs. You should have posted it here X)

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idk

Post by Jackinthebox6 on Sat Dec 25, 2010 7:07 am

i have a bit of a problem with awesome points. It lowers my self esteem as I see you people have so many and it's just a bit of a turn off to me. It makes me only wanna send pm's Razz
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Re: Proof Reading and Such

Post by Hazama on Sat Dec 25, 2010 10:03 am

^ lol dont mind that awesome points crap XD I dunno how it works tbh but it seems like it gets added when you post. I dont know how much is added though. And now that I think about it, I just noticed I have a 10k awesome points lol XP

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Re: Proof Reading and Such

Post by Hiyuki on Sat Dec 25, 2010 10:18 am

Yo Jackinbox tip 101: Put everything you think of this chapter here lol. Don't go sending PMs to me only because everybody's opinion is needed and wanted.

>Quote
/52-1-
---Hya hya hya hya <---maybe a 'bwahahahaaa' would work //No. Don't Americanize this plox lol. Hya is fine.
...Oh you really...... {Now fix this to proper english} <---this actually kinda makes sense to me so idk //If this makes sense to you then it's fine.

11/L< And Ode needs to show some spunk! <---didnt wanna make the vocab too sophisticated, I think it fits the character's image. //Who's Ode? Razz I guess that's fine.

15/L< It's fun to tease you pure-minded for it's the feudal lord's only source of merriment. could replace fun with something like 'compelling' but it seems he is speaking to a youth so in my opinion the vocab should be simple....again // ┐( ̄ー ̄)┌ Just leave it as that^. Seems fine to me.
>End Quote

>To your inquiries
1) I'm don't have fantastic vocabulary so certain things might not be TL-ed right. And, I come from Singapore. A place where her own set of English rules exist. Live here for long and you won't be able to speak proper English, let alone being homegrown and all. I has no confidences in my engrish grammar at alls. So excuse me if I continue to whine about my English being bad.

2) No tips bro. =| Just read and make sure it makes sense? Sentence structure, basic grammar, punctuation, and if you have vocab that might fit in better point it out! (・∀・) I'm here to learn so, kishinaide.

3) I'm not really looking for changes per say. lol Again, I'm just surprised that there's no horrible grammar and major changes in there. Because I suck in language and communication. ┐( ̄ー ̄)┌ I just have to say it again. ┐(◔ ◡ ◔)┌

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Ve velcomes you vith open arms. Hey, new slavestaff! What there to complain about. ┐( ̄ー ̄)┌

^Actually, complains are possible but, ┐( ̄ー ̄)┌ so long as you give no shit and take all the no shit. ヾ(゜∀゜)ノ♪ Dai kangei desu.



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Re: Proof Reading and Such

Post by Hazama on Sat Dec 25, 2010 1:04 pm

^ kyaa you're so cool~~
now go back TLCing weaver! XD

@Jack: Welcome(again)! XD I changed you to proofer rank now so you should be able to see the staff forum ^^
yo ass work for us nao~
lol anyway.... XD
we're really glad to finally have a new proofer(after having a scarce of that position).
just hang out at the staff section where real work is done ^^ Translations are to be posted there and all X)
tbh I really think you can only start proofing for real next year. We're currently planning to have a mega release on new year's eve so everythings most likely done for this year Smile

btw, then can I finally use the godseeker script he posted here , hiyuki-chan?

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Thanks Everyone

Post by Jackinthebox6 on Sat Dec 25, 2010 3:11 pm

You all seem so friendly! So yah thanks for accepting me and I'll work to the best of my abilities... Smile

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Re: Proof Reading and Such

Post by Hiyuki on Sat Dec 25, 2010 4:07 pm

@Hazama-chin: Why am I cool? ._. And no, you can't use the proofed copy here. Please get Jack to give you a new copy with the corrections thank you.

@Jack-kun: ^plox

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Post by The Admin With a Big Name on Sat Dec 25, 2010 4:22 pm

I think he put up the version with corrections I think im not sure though.
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Re: Proof Reading and Such

Post by Hiyuki on Sun Dec 26, 2010 1:07 am

┐( ̄ー ̄)┌ Ask Jack.

@Jack: ^plox

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God Seeker ch 2 final proof i think =/

Post by Jackinthebox6 on Sun Dec 26, 2010 4:29 am

I believe i updated all the other downloads so they're all final proofs Smile
so download whichever one...
and I'm out of storage space so I can't post it again Razz
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Re: Proof Reading and Such

Post by Hiyuki on Sun Dec 26, 2010 11:16 am

@Hazama: Ok. Go use it lol.

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Re: Proof Reading and Such

Post by Hazama on Sun Dec 26, 2010 10:54 pm

Done~~
XD now we just have to wait for cloth weaver and we're all good Smile)

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What do I do exactly?

Post by Jackinthebox6 on Sun Dec 26, 2010 11:07 pm

Do i just chiil until I get assigned certain manga to proof?
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Re: Proof Reading and Such

Post by Hazama on Mon Dec 27, 2010 12:02 am

most likely...
I got some translations with me from other series but lets take that for the next year ^^

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Post by Hiyuki on Mon Dec 27, 2010 1:24 am

@Hazama: ^You're just lazy.

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Post by Hazama on Mon Dec 27, 2010 4:22 am

^

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